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Dozen Deadly Sins
THOU SHALT NOT
- Scare listeners.
- Give orders.
- Start a story with:
- "as expected."
- "in a surprise move."
- "a new development today."
- "our top story tonight is."
- "there is" or "it is."
- a participial phrase.
- a personal pronoun.
- a question.
- a quotation.
- an unknown or unfamiliar name.
- someone's "making news" or "making history."
- "another," "more" or "once again."
- Characterize news as "good" or "bad."
- Use any form of "to be" as the main verb in your lead.
- Bury the verb in a noun.
- Use "yesterday" or "continues" in your first sentence.
- Use "no," "not" and negatives in your first sentence.
- Use newspaper style, language or rituals.
- Cram too much information into a story.
- Lose or mislead a listener.
- Make a factual error.
This list has been adapted from: Writing Broadcast News--Shorter, Sharper, Stronger, 2d ed., a professional handbook by Mervin Block. It's published by Bonus Books, Chicago (800-225-3775).
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